It looks like this:
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b
a2 (repeating line)
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b
a1
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a2
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b
a1
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a2
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A good example is "The Story We Know" by Martha Collins.
Here's one I wrote a few years ago:
Unexpected Treat
Relentless winter winds blow
from dark of night to day’s full light,
chilling to the marrow.
One blue black crow
sits swaying, his tree top perch a fight-
relentless winter winds blow.
He stares across the meadow
searching with piercing eyesight,
chilling to the marrow.
He spots a shape, a distant shadow-
this whets his appetite.
Relentless winter winds blow.
It’s a dead, white-throated sparrow,
covered in parasites-
chilling to the marrow.
He flies like an archer’s arrow,
eats it in three swift bites.
Relentless winter winds blow,
chilling to the marrow.
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